Ryan, I thought I was commenting on the very first portfolio of the person who opened this topic. Sorry for confusing you.
I didn’t see the most recent comments.
But if you still want my feedback, yours does have a structure . “The scale of projects ” seems like a good organization strategy to me.
And the “graphic movement” presentation is very appropriate, where you have the collage of sketches.
Great job! How long did it take you to create your portfolio?