Portfolio Feedback – Graduate Student

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March 13, 2016 at 11:45 pm #151501

Aaron Ackerman
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In preparation for summer internship applications. Would greatly appreciate some fresh eyes and feedback.

https://issuu.com/aaronperspective/docs/2016_portfolio_ackerman

March 19, 2016 at 4:59 pm #151504

Aaron Ackerman
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Anybody out there?

March 19, 2016 at 7:47 pm #151503

Evan McPherson
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Overall I like the quality of your drawings and mixture of skills etc.

In my opinion you could maybe condense the portfolio. The sculpture park representation could probably use some rearranging and hierarchy, particularly the diagramming. Very little information for a full spread + redundancy. Maybe considering reworking this and place this with the title page for the project. since you have the plan in their twice.

good luck!

March 20, 2016 at 6:27 pm #151502

Aaron Ackerman
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Evan, thanks for taking the time to make some thoughtful suggestions. That is one of the pages I also thought could use some re-working. I think your right, I can probably move it to the title spread. Thanks!
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