Portfolio Feedback – Graduate Student

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    Aaron Ackerman
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    In preparation for summer internship applications.  Would greatly appreciate some fresh eyes and feedback.

    https://issuu.com/aaronperspective/docs/2016_portfolio_ackerman

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    Aaron Ackerman
    Participant

    Anybody out there?

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    Evan McPherson
    Participant

    Overall I like the quality of your drawings and mixture of skills etc.

    In my opinion you could maybe condense the portfolio. The sculpture park representation could probably use some rearranging and hierarchy, particularly the diagramming.  Very little information for a full spread + redundancy.  Maybe considering reworking this and place this with the title page for the project. since you have the plan in their twice.

    good luck!

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    Aaron Ackerman
    Participant

    Evan, thanks for taking the time to make some thoughtful suggestions.  That is one of the pages I also thought could use some re-working.  I think your right, I can probably move it to the title spread.  Thanks!

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