[Andrew Furmanski]

Getting there indeed! It looks great, I would still maybe work with the titles and perhaps the alignment of some images from page to page. But that is nitpicking, it looks wonderful

[Andrew Furmanski]

Akinyinka,

Great advice. Lots of really good things to consider. I appreciate it. 

Perhaps we can swap some art someday 😉

[Andrew Furmanski]

Aiyou, thanks so much for the feedback! Great advice

[Andrew Furmanski]

Thanks for the well wishes guys. I’m still looking to get some intense crit on my work though if anyone is still interested!

[Andrew Furmanski]

That’s why I’m looking for work outside of the US…

[Andrew Furmanski]

Thanks so much for the comment Rachel. I hadn’t thought to add captions describing the media for my individual project pages but thats a great idea, thanks!

[Andrew Furmanski]

Akinyinka,

I think that you have so many beautiful images and example of works that you might actually be too wealthy. Your works are great but your portfolio seems a bit busy. If I were you I would really spend some time choosing what is most important and then highlighting those images or projects and displaying them in an effective manner. Do you remember talking about the swiss grid from school?! I find myself going back to that often…also, designishistory.com has some really cool typographic/graphic design ideas that may help you pull it all together!

It looks good but I think you might be able to sharpen it up just a little bit! Hopefully this crit helps…

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