Need feedback on portfolio

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  • #156971
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thanks for the really in depth feedback. It’s very helpful. Gave me a lot to think about.

    #156970
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thank you . I appreciate the suggestion.

    #156969
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thanks. The consistent fonts was a great suggestion.

    #156968
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thank you very much.

    #156967
    Dave
    Participant

    Very nice Akinyinka, it gives a good impression of who you are as a designer. I like the paintings.

    You could beef up the constuction and technical side a little more. Also think about tailoring the emphasis towards the job you’re applying for. Always ask the question “what is it they need most”, is my best advice.

    #156966

    Akinyinka, much improvement over your original version.  However, I still think you need to work on the lineweight for the memorial design part, try using four to five line widths, e.g. (000, 00, 1, 2, and 3), and if the firm is only looking for a designer, cut back to only two pages of your art work and remove the word “art” from the cover and inside page.

    Best of luck to you.

    #156965
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thank you very much for the advice.

    #156964
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thank you very much. I will need that luck.

    #156963
    Craig Anthony
    Participant

    I’m also a big fan of yours landplanner. I’m sure one day we’ll be able to sit down and have a cold frosty somewhere on this tiny planet.

    #156962
    Michelle Lu
    Participant

    Gorgeous portfolio ! 

    #156961
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thank you very much for your kind words.

    #156960
    Anonymous
    Inactive

    Keep up the good work.  Can you tell me what types of software programs  you use for 2D rendering? 

    #156959
    mauiBob
    Participant

    YES! Now that’s more like it. I’m still not sure about the lone man standing against the wall for the Memory Garden project. Photoshop him out. Anyway, it looks really good. Nice balance of work.

    #156958
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Thanks! I’m already getting some replies from firms. Not being totally ignored as much:)

    #156957
    Akin Adekile
    Participant

    Landscape planner, autocad and photoshop were used for the 2d renderings.

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